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: Thank you for looking closer. The article was written by many users, which explains mixed spellings. I’ll look, but have a few tasks with a time stamp first. The symmetrical construction of the whole composition, as pictured under “Structure and scoring”, is the key aspect of it, and how could it be said to be understood by you? –[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 09:35, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
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: Thank you for looking closer. The article was written by many users, which explains mixed spellings. I’ll look, but have a few tasks with a time stamp first. The symmetrical construction of the whole composition, as pictured under “Structure and scoring”, is the key aspect of it, and how could it be said to be understood by you? –[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 09:35, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
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:: Maybe I just needed to keep reading. –[[User:Laser_brain|<span style=”color: purple;”>”’Laser brain”'</span>]] [[User_talk:Laser_brain|<span style=”color: purple;”>(talk)</span>]] 19:34, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
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:: Maybe I just needed to keep reading. –[[User:Laser_brain|<span style=”color: purple;”>”’Laser brain”'</span>]] [[User_talk:Laser_brain|<span style=”color: purple;”>(talk)</span>]] 19:34, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
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* Made some small edits for clarity and consistency.
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* Can you provide the passage(s) from Jones p. 203 that support the following text: “Jones noted that the tenor part is particularly expressive. The last movement has the same music as the different text of the last stanza, creating a frame that encloses the whole work”
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* Explanation needed for “rhetorical homophony”
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* “While the soprano sings the chorale melody, the lower voices intensify the gesture dramatically with word painting: ‘weg’ is repeated several times in fast succession.” Is there some significance to this word? What is the translation?
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* “Performers of Jesu, meine Freude have to decide…” The choir are the performers.. wouldn’t a director or producer decide? The end of that long sentence doesn’t make a lot of sense to me. I would break it up to more clearly articulate what the performance options are.
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* “based on the motet’s first (=11th) and seventh movements” I’m not sure what the parenthetical is expressing.
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That’s all from me for now. It’s in fine shape. –[[User:Laser_brain|<span style=”color: purple;”>”’Laser brain”'</span>]] [[User_talk:Laser_brain|<span style=”color: purple;”>(talk)</span>]] 02:43, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
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