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*[[U.S. Route 30 in Iowa]] runs generally east–west for 330 miles (530 km), and is the longest [[Iowa Primary Highway System|primary highway in Iowa]]. Going east, US 30 enters [[Iowa]] at the [[Missouri River]] bridge at [[Blair, Nebraska]], ”’and exits at [[Clinton, Iowa|Clinton]], where the [[Mississippi River]] is crossed.”’
*[[U.S. Route 30 in Iowa]] runs generally east–west for 330 miles (530 km), and is the longest [[Iowa Primary Highway System|primary highway in Iowa]]. Going east, US 30 enters [[Iowa]] at the [[Missouri River]] bridge at [[Blair, Nebraska]], ”’and exits at [[Clinton, Iowa|Clinton]], where the [[Mississippi River]] is crossed.”’
:The bolded part of this sentence sounds very awkward and non-fluent to me. How about using the wording from the actual article instead – “…and ends [or exits] at the Mississippi River crossing at [[Clinton, Iowa|Clinton]]?” -[[User:Elmer Clark|Elmer Clark]] ([[User talk:Elmer Clark|talk]]) 02:44, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
:The bolded part of this sentence sounds very awkward and non-fluent to me. How about using the wording from the actual article instead – “…and ends [edit: should be “exits“] at the Mississippi River crossing at [[Clinton, Iowa|Clinton]]?” -[[User:Elmer Clark|Elmer Clark]] ([[User talk:Elmer Clark|talk]]) 02:44, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
::But US 30 doesn’t end there, just the Iowa portion. US 30 continues on both sides of the state, thus the terms “enter” and “exit” were used.–[[User:Wehwalt|Wehwalt]] ([[User talk:Wehwalt|talk]]) 03:04, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
::But US 30 doesn’t end there, just the Iowa portion. US 30 continues on both sides of the state, thus the terms “enter” and “exit” were used.–[[User:Wehwalt|Wehwalt]] ([[User talk:Wehwalt|talk]]) 03:04, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
:::Good point, thanks – I edited my suggestion. -[[User:Elmer Clark|Elmer Clark]] ([[User talk:Elmer Clark|talk]]) 03:07, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
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