もっと詳しく

I think I have a poem that actually fits the theme of the week for once. I wrote it a long time ago and I recently revised it to an acceptable reading level. I’ve kept the original rhyme pattern; however, I forgot what I originally wrote it about so it’s kind of wierd reading it myself, but maybe you can figure it out.

Another Attempt

Distance approaching is hard to hear
Waves of noise have been cut
Too many fell down in front
Amplitude shaped forms a tear

Unmistakable to anyone but us
What you’ve done to my heart
Can you hear my heart
At negative degree Celsius

I’m tired of trying this path
Someone give me something to do
I need importance to finish what’s due
Purpose and usefulness, as found in math